Class feedback

the feedback we had received from the class helped us improve our story line and the characters further. after the feed back we had we decided to make changes such as the name of the main character to a much more feminine and this way more was reflected about the character in her name. we has decided to change the initial idea of 'kai' to' fai' as we thought 'fai' sounded much more like a female name.

from the feedback we had also realised that that our inital story was abit confusing therefore we had decided to change some of the lines to ensure it fitted the production  title and our genre we had chosen.we also decided to add more  characters into the story to make it much more interesting  and as the feedback suggested that we should as it would create tension.

some questions that were asked by the members of the class made us think more about our story line and the feed back helped us improve it to make it more interesting.

 we did not make any change to the production title as everyone thought it was a good selection of name and also  'nightmare' fitted into our genre (horror). therefore we did not make any changes regarding the title.

 the questions 'how did the main character die's?' and 'who killed her' came up a lot therefore we made sure it was interesting and different in order to surprise the audience with what actually happens. this creates tension and makes the audience want to go on and watch the rest of the movie.